Saturday, February 16, 2019

Let It Go: Let Them Write!


In last week’s post, I addressed the need for teacher self-care and how coaches can support it while improving instruction.  I suggested that you encourage teachers to lighten their load by letting go of the hours they spend grading worksheets and I suggested some alternative to that practice. Part of that advice was to have students do more writing.  Writing is an effective way for learners to show what they know. An open-ended response allows students with differing knowledge and ability to tackle the task and demonstrate what they are learning. Through writing, they can show their understanding of concepts and their increasing skills.

Suggesting more writing may seem antithetical to the idea of lightening a teacher’s load. What could be more time-consuming that grading students’ written work?  While it’s true that providing extensive feedback on written work can be time-consuming, let’s support teachers in letting go of less-productive means of providing feedback and instead remind them of ways that are both efficient and effective.

Fewer Comments

To start with, let’s remind teachers that extensive written comments on finished products are not productive.  A final draft isn’t a prime teaching opportunity. Students are done with that piece and likely to learn little from exhaustive comments that may be written there, especially when these comments point out something that should have been done differently.

Instead, find one or two things to celebrate.  Look for something that represents recent growth for the student. Do they show they are just beginning to grasp a new concept? Celebrate it!  Did they use a more advanced writing skill once in the paper? Point it out and praise it!  When we draw attention to those burgeoning abilities, they are more likely to be expanded and repeated.

We can also narrow the need for comments on final drafts by responding earlier in the process. Encourage teachers to collect a draft of the paper.  But instead of littering the draft with reactions, teachers can lighten their load and make their feedback more meaningful by asking what the students want support with. Before turning the paper in, students could highlight a section they want the teacher’s help with. On a tiny strip of paper stapled to the top, the student can write a question or express a concern or confusion. After a quick look over the entire paper, the teacher focuses his attention on what the student wants help with. One or two comments give the student something to work with. More than that overwhelms.

Student Self-Help

Some zealous teachers end up doing the work for students when they give feedback on written work. One teacher I know spends hours giving feedback on student papers.  She catches every punctuation error and carefully inserts the correction. She rewords awkward sentences, writing her edited version between the double-spaced lines. Her students have a love-hate relationship with this response. They’re glad they can meet this teacher’s expectations by inserting her recommendations, but they hate opening their papers and seeing all the red. They also hate losing ownership for their work. It sucks the joy out.

Encourage teachers to resist the urge to do the work for students. Instead, teachers can help students help themselves through mini-lessons on points of confusion, rubrics that share clear expectations, anchor charts that can be referenced during the work, and conferring while students work.  Also encourage peer feedback and student self-assessment. Tools like rubrics and anchor charts make this work more effective, too.

Don’t Grade Everything

Teachers may feel obligated to review everything their students write.  I think this comes from a mistaken view of the purpose of writing. When we view writing as simply an opportunity for students to show the teacher what they know, then it does seem obligatory for the teacher to respond. However, if writing is viewed as an opportunity for the student to explore his own thinking, to learn and to grow, then the process of writing itself has served the purpose. This purpose should be explicitly shared with students.

Some pieces of writing should receive teachers’ attention. Targeted feedback corrects misconceptions and supports growth. Additionally, some writing deserves an audience. Teachers can lighten their load and enrich the experience when an external, broader audience engages with students’ work. This makes writing more purposeful, authentic, and motivating.  And when students know their work is going public, they take more care.

Jeff Wilhelm said, “If you’re reading all of your students’ writing, they’re not writing enough.” Giving students many opportunities to write doesn’t mean teachers should be weighed down with volumes of papers to review.  Less is more.  Giving fewer comments, letting some work go unreviewed, and giving students tools for helping themselves can make teachers’ workload more manageable and increases students’ learning.

This week, you might want to take a look at:

Top 10 tips for conferring:



Why every teacher deserves a coach:



Why and how for shared reading:



Tools for changing the grading conversation:



Lessons from learning to read Hebrew about beginning reading instruction:


That’s all for this week.  Happy Coaching!

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